Carson The Crab 01/18/2011
CommentsVincent 01/18/2011 9:01pm
Second children's book about Carson the crab learning obedience. Feel free to leave any comments. lavada loper 01/20/2011 5:18pm
I think it is very nice. I love the obey and do it with a happy heart. I love the colors in the pictures as well. At first I did not understand what the child was saying at the end. Take care of yourself. melanie 01/20/2011 9:10pm
cute! Carey 01/21/2011 9:49am
Ok, only being honest cause I know that's what you want, Vincent. I really like it. Great concept, cute characters, and great helpful end (answers a question). If you're asking for advice on publishing, then I'd have to go a little deeper. Something is missing. Possibly adding background? Also, what age group were you thinking for this? Eli's? Bryar's? Makes a big difference. The story could possibly be made a little deeper for a little older child--4 or 5 ish. Just throwing out ideas really. I think further. You don't have to publish this, btw. Vincent 01/21/2011 2:28pm
Appreciate your suggestions Carey. The target age range would be 1-4 yrs old. What thoughts do you have in order to go deeper. I will be adding Biblical verses at the end of the book so that parents can use them to teach older children about obedience. Gloria K 02/12/2011 3:47am
Ugandan kids would love this. Its colorful and entertaining. Simple and the message comes through clearly. Very nice! Emily 03/14/2011 3:44pm
very cute! and creative as usual. what was the box at dinner time? Your comment will be posted after it is approved. Leave a Reply |
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